Socio-chan

I've added further edits to 'Clarence', noticing I lost a lot of readers after chapter 1, I'm trying to make it more entertaining. It now has way more jokes and references than it started out with, which I think helps it blend in better with the chapters after it.
          	
          	I also edited out a few spelling errors and changed this and that. I felt the last chapter was set up slightly confusing so I changed that too.
          	
          	Still the same story, but if you've only read the original, in a second read-through you should notice lots of changes.
          	
          	Have a great day!

Socio-chan

@evilturkey5  Thank you so much haha!
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evilturkey5

@Socio-chan Whoever didn't read on is an idiot! That story's amazing and hilarious!
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Socio-chan

I've added further edits to 'Clarence', noticing I lost a lot of readers after chapter 1, I'm trying to make it more entertaining. It now has way more jokes and references than it started out with, which I think helps it blend in better with the chapters after it.
          
          I also edited out a few spelling errors and changed this and that. I felt the last chapter was set up slightly confusing so I changed that too.
          
          Still the same story, but if you've only read the original, in a second read-through you should notice lots of changes.
          
          Have a great day!

Socio-chan

@evilturkey5  Thank you so much haha!
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evilturkey5

@Socio-chan Whoever didn't read on is an idiot! That story's amazing and hilarious!
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Socio-chan

Updated the story 'Clarence'. Fixed an instance where I accidentally changed tenses and added some more fun Bijuu Mike references, especially in the first chapter which I felt was a bit lacking in them.
          
          You should be able to spot several references in Chapter 2 right off the bat as well.
          
          In the future, I'm hoping to create a sequel or at least a couple new chapters, but that's for the future. For now, I hope you enjoy the story and the funs I've added.
          
          ~Socio-chan

Socio-chan

I'm pretty sure all the chapters got updated btw, just to clarify.
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