Socio-chan
I've added further edits to 'Clarence', noticing I lost a lot of readers after chapter 1, I'm trying to make it more entertaining. It now has way more jokes and references than it started out with, which I think helps it blend in better with the chapters after it. I also edited out a few spelling errors and changed this and that. I felt the last chapter was set up slightly confusing so I changed that too. Still the same story, but if you've only read the original, in a second read-through you should notice lots of changes. Have a great day!
evilturkey5
@Socio-chan Whoever didn't read on is an idiot! That story's amazing and hilarious!
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