Susan

Aaaaaand, just shortly after, the sixth chapter is up.
          It's a bit shorter than I had expected, and I may add to it later, but as of now, this is it.
          Please read and review. All sorts of criticism is accepted and greatly appreciated.
          Thanks, again, in advance. I hope it is a pleasant read : )
          ~Sockks (aka Kopfhead)

So, fifth chapter is finally up. Took a while, I know, I deeply apologize for that. I ran into a bit of a speed bump involving writer's block and ended up not really knowing how to finish it.
          I'm still a bit iffy on it, but that's why I've got you guys, right?...right?...
          Anyway : )
          Thanks in advance to those who read, and /please/ critique. Anything and everything is loved, appreciated, and helps me out a bunch.
          ~Sockks (aka Kopfhead)

Just let me know when you put up the fifth chapter okay? Because I would love to read it too! 

@Youngappreticerabbit 
          
          I'm currently working on the fifth chapter, as well as a possible prologue.
          The next chapter should be up some time next week, however the prologue is just a maybe. It I find a need for it, I may stick it in at some point, but I want to focus on the original chapter first.

so when do you plan to update Utopia?

@Youngappreticerabbit 
          I know, right?
          It's always nerve-wracking at first, but once you get that first comment, whether good or bad, it makes you feel better that someone was willing to take time out of their day to not only read a bit of it, but to give a little critiquing.

Glad to make you happy! I know how you feel! I get so happy and excited over just  one comment. Even if it only say good job. :)