@TearsThatRain037 I just read you book, and it's very well written. Unlike other books I've read, this one has very good spelling and it's not so rushing, and the descriptions are very good and detailed.
Again, I'm not a profesional and that I myself haven't written a story yet, this is my opinion since many authors tend to be very rushed with their books or have a lot os spelling mistakes or just don't know how to structure it, but not yours.