@Dashup05 I like the story line, yet that's a common story line! No offense. So i except you to give variations and uniqueness to your story with its end! And i mean No harm here! So all the best for your forwards in the story!
@ofthefeels I am really impressed by the story, good luck with your writing. I hope you two should make more stories like this and publish this to the world as a writer duo. Good luck.