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Hello,
          
          I am getting mixed reactions from you on my Rowaelin book and I would like it if you could clarify whether you like it or not? and if you don't can you tell me how to improve.
          
          I started writing it when I was 12 and now I'm 14, so as you can probably guess I have improved. 
          
          Of course I'm glad you are reading and commenting as it helps me out and lets me know you like it, but I feel quite attacked at the moment.
          
          Thank you 
          Jasmine