Be_passionate

Hello! I’m writing a story called The Twelve Kingdoms. It’s about each zodiac sign having their own kingdom. When the kingdoms no longer get along a war is started. It’s a fight for which sign comes out on top. I was wondering if you could give me any advice or tell me if my story is good or bad. Thank you and have a great day! 

Be_passionate

Thank you so much! 
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SolarPFlare

Howdy! Now, about your story... it's very interesting! I never really read any stories about personified Zodiacs before... 
            To give you some advice, jot down the main plot points and ending, something to give yourself an idea of how you want the story to go down. That way, you can publish more chapters with ease. I hope this helps, good luck with your story ~^w^~
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