@xxSMxx if u insist. :) well, I find that u should develop the characters's personality more and maybe the plot is a bit too fast but other than that I think it's ok. That's just my opinion tho but I'm enjoying the story soooo ya. :D
@PaulineOster no prob. I'm enjoying myself by reading ur book so there's nothing wrong in me showing support. :) although, (don't get mad) there r some parts that r a bit confusing but other then that I like it so far.