Solelollipop

@xxSMxx keep up the good work! ^^

Solelollipop

@xxSMxx if u insist. :) well, I find that u should develop the characters's personality more and maybe the plot is a bit too fast but other than that I think it's ok. That's just my opinion tho but I'm enjoying the story soooo ya. :D

xxSMxx

:D okay ^^ thanks a lot for the feedback! I will try and work on it in the second book :)
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