SolsticeSoul_803

Hey everyone,
          	
          	First of all, I want to say a massive, heartfelt thank you to those of you who are still here. It has been more than six months since my last update. Between navigating some personal matters and fighting off a massive case of writer's block, I had to step away for a bit.
          	
          	"Unplayed Over" means so much to me, and I refused to rush the final chapter just to get it done. I wanted to wait until I was in a calm mindset to give these characters the beautiful ending they deserve.
          	
          	With the real-life India tour of England happening right now, it feels like the absolute perfect moment to bring this journey to a close.
          	
          	Get ready, because the very last chapter will be published incredibly soon! Thank you for your endless patience and love. See with the final chapter!!! ❤️

SolsticeSoul_803

Hey everyone,
          
          First of all, I want to say a massive, heartfelt thank you to those of you who are still here. It has been more than six months since my last update. Between navigating some personal matters and fighting off a massive case of writer's block, I had to step away for a bit.
          
          "Unplayed Over" means so much to me, and I refused to rush the final chapter just to get it done. I wanted to wait until I was in a calm mindset to give these characters the beautiful ending they deserve.
          
          With the real-life India tour of England happening right now, it feels like the absolute perfect moment to bring this journey to a close.
          
          Get ready, because the very last chapter will be published incredibly soon! Thank you for your endless patience and love. See with the final chapter!!! ❤️

Sweetpassionnnn

Hello dear author. I have a kind request which you may decline at your wish. I have just published a book called FOURTEEN? It's only one chapter long. Could you please please check it out. I'm looking for honest feedbacks from good authors on here. It's only one chapter. I'll read a whole book of yours in return. Also, can we be friends?

Sweetpassionnnn

@Sweetpassionnnn thank you so much for the feedback darling.  Everything has been noted. Now I have to figure out how to slip Everything into place
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SolsticeSoul_803

@Sweetpassionnnn As for the characters, Sae feels grounded and relatable. We can see his fear, self loathing and eventually his desperate courage. The detail about growing his hair shows his desire to hode without being openly shy. 
            His brother on the other hand, is still a bit of a mystery to me. Him stating that he knew about Sae's feelings makes him instantly more interesting. It kinda suggest that perhaps he is just as burdened by this relationship as Sae is (I can be wrong though). 
            
            To conclude, this is a high potential opening as I said before. It balances romance and fantasy tropes well. My advice is to do your best in maintaining this level of emotional intimacy throughout the plot.
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SolsticeSoul_803

@Sweetpassionnnn The move from confession to summoning is very fast. While this works as a cliffhanger, make sure that in the next chapter you allow the characters to react to the emotional fallout. Don't let it swallow the emotional plot. 
            And I'd like a clarification on their relationship. It might be worth clarifying early on if they are biological siblings, step brothers or found family brothers as it might be a sensitive topic for most of the readers if they're biologically related. 
            Small tip: when typing on Wattpad, keep an eye on spacing in the dialogue. 
            
            I love that this sort of remind me of hunger games (I'm a huge fan btw), but I hope you've brought your own unique ideas to the world building. It is very important to be unique when you're writing fantasy.
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SolsticeSoul_803

Happy Valentine's Day my lovelies!!! ❤️
          I just published "Dear Adrian (Bonus Chapter)" of my story "Unplayed Over ". https://www.wattpad.com/1609309457?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SolsticeSoul_803

KPMMPK

When will u come back ???❤️❤️❤️

SolsticeSoul_803

@KPMMPK I've been very busy this week and it's not over yet. So probably next week :⁠-⁠(
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SolsticeSoul_803

Hey lovelies!! Check out my short story "Into the Blue" and give me your thoughts ❤️
          I just published "01" of my story "Into the Blue ". https://www.wattpad.com/1601452818?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SolsticeSoul_803

SolsticeSoul_803

Go hurry and check it out babes!! ❤️
          I just published "30. The Evidence of you" of my story "Unplayed Over ". https://www.wattpad.com/1600700360?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SolsticeSoul_803

KPMMPK

When are you coming back?

KPMMPK

@KPMMPK ❤️❤️❤️❤️ok no rush dr .take your time
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SolsticeSoul_803

@KPMMPK I’m coming back this week! Chapter 30 will be up soon, and I’ll also upload a new short story as an apology ❤️ Thank you for being so patient.
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SolsticeSoul_803

Just published chapter 29 of Unplayed Over!!!
          I just published "29. The Stroke of Midnight " of my story "Unplayed Over ". https://www.wattpad.com/1593485397?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SolsticeSoul_803