hey I'm ali and I am in love with your poems, you're only 13 and can write with such skill and with the words of experience. Its extremely impressive.
I'm 15- so not all that older haha.
I write poems too, romantic ones and also darker poetry, similiar to your own but longer.
If you have a chance I'd appreciate it you'd check them out for me. I'd love some feedback.
I have also written the first part of a thriller, called , "The Stench of Death" it is focused around a relationship between a brother and sister.
The first part is only very short and , if, you would read it and maybe vote or give me some feedback, it would only take you a few minutes I promise!
I don't intend to continue it until more people have read the first part so please help me out.