My very literate daughter read the start of my story. “Too dark! You have to make people LIKE your characters before you drag them through the knothole!”
So there’s a brand new chapter one. And, of course, yet another new title and cover. Because I talked to a publicist yesterday and we’re actually going to do this thing.
So—take a peek at Chapter One (brand new) of “Transient Risk” (brand new title, same work in progress) and tell me whether you think my daughter will be happy with my opening now.