Yanfei_main3
Just wanna say I like your new pfp! I don’t know who’s that character but they look cool!
Something12095
Something12095
I have posed the Introduction to 'To tired for this', so please check that out.
I will see if I can post the first chapter of 'To tired for this' and the first chapter of f! Uzui x Tokyo revengers tomorrow:)
ToniTopaz502
@Something12095 I've read the new chapter and I love it thank you for letting me know if it's not to much trouble for you could you continue letting me know when the next chapters will be updated if not that's fine.
Something12095
I have posted the Introduction and Intro to F! Uzui x Tokyo revengers, so go check that out. I might also post the first chapter later today or tomorrow.
I might also post the Introduction for 'To tired for this' today
ToniTopaz502
Hey there just want to know when the next chapter of your kny x tokyo revengers book will be updated please let me know as soon as you have the time. ♡ thanks♡
Something12095
@ToniTopaz502 I have updated the book today and have started a new Kny x tokyo revengers^^
Yanfei_main3
I like the concept of your book! I’m wondering if you know that there’s a F!Giyuu Demon Slayerx Tokyo Revengers in a different fanfic here. Are you perhaps inspired by it? Or is this the first time you’ve heard of this? Oh and is it okay if I also give you a few tips? I’m also trying to be a writer but I’m not exactly done with writing my book.
Something12095
@Yanfei_main3 Thank you for the tips! You have already giving me some more ideas how to write it better and more things to write ^^
Yanfei_main3
I’m sorry for the late reply! Anyway here’s some tips in bullet form mostly because it’s easier to read:
•Get a proofreader(someone who reads your work and points out mistakes before you publish it) if you want to make sure your grammar is good. Ways to get a proofreader is to ask online(make sure they are legit and not a scamming ) or a friend who’s good with grammar or your readers who’s willing to volunteer for free!
•Use more formal language and less casual language if you prefer! (Unless you’re writing character dialogue, it depends if the character speaks casually or formally).
•Making sure the character stays and acts in character! You’ve been doing a good job so far with this one but you’re bound to encounter a problem that will make it hard for you to think about how this character will interact with this one. Try putting yourself in their shoes and try thinking like them or analyze (or read other peoples analysis of the character) the character and read character studies about them. (Can be found on ao3 a website).
•Put your character in more interactions with the other ones and make it make sense, if one of the characters were to just be randomly be obsessed with the MC after one meeting well not thats awfully out of character, if you’re going for an accurate story that wants to stay true to the character. Fanfiction is whatever the hell YOU want it to be, you want Mikey to be obsessed with your MC? Okay not my business but if you’re going for accuracy then I recommend you do the things I listed in the bullet above.
•You’re going for a Demon Slayer x Tokyo Revengers book so I have to ask, how will you write the Demon Slayer ending to Tokyo Revengers ending? How are you going to mix the world of Demon Slayer with Tokyo Revengers?
I would like to put more tips but I am about to sleep right now, I hope these tips help you out! PLUS WATTPAD SAID THIS WAS ALREADY TOO LONG…
Something12095
@Yanfei_main3 Im glad that you like it. Yes im inspired by a F!Giyuu Demon SlayerX Tokyo revengers Fanfic and I would love some tips, so I can better at writeing ^^
Shinmer12
I love your work its wonderful