Of course! Your story was amazing! I noticed you were receiving some criticism. Please remember that these people are giving you creative criticism. They're not trying to be rude, all they are trying to do is help you improve. So please don't feel frustrated about it. I know, I use to, and still do get frustrated when people correct my work, making me feel that I hadn't done a great job like I once thought I did. But you just got to remember that they're not trying to shame your work, they're trying to help it stand out and shine. Remember there is always room for improvement so even when it feels like everyone is down on your work, keep writing because it's important to you, keep writing because one day you could become a fantastic published author and you'll be able to thank the other writers for their criticism because without them you wouldn't be where you would be. If that all makes any sense❤️
