@loveitall786 okay, sorry, apparently I should do some background check. Okay. If you were born in England, and had proper English education, why can I spot so many grammatical mistakes? I don't think a native English speaker would have so many mistakes in one chapter. I am a Hong Konger, and I reckon that my English is better than you. I am not being rude in my previous comment. I just want to say that maybe you should try edit it, or even find an editor. That's it.