@Sonnylori888
Hi
I recently started writing a story and I would really love some honest feedback. Please read it and tell me if it’s good or if there’s anything I should improve — writing style, emotions, pacing, characters, anything at all. Constructive criticism is welcome because I genuinely want to make the story better. Thank you for taking the time to read it ✨
"I've gone through everything: from watching my people die to being empty as nothingness," Lucian hisses with a soft smile.
"Why are you even still alive, then?," she asks, not quite understanding his reasons.
"Who? Me?," he smirks at her question. "Who lied to you like that?"
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This is not a vampire novel—this is the vampire novel.
Welcome to "From the Dead to a Heartbeat", the world full of vamps, werewolves, demons and witches to which you'll be hooked real soon!
Genres:
-Vampire
-Werewolf
-Mystery
-Humor
-Thriller
-Horror
-Teenfiction
-Dark Romance
Hope you visit such novel! ♥️♥️♥️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406692881?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis
Hey,like revenge novels? I wrote one also it’s about senator killing his rival in politics and the victim’s son making a vow to repay the favor Blood for Blood,hence bringing the title Blood for Blood:A boy vow
It’s on my profile you can check it out I promise it won’t disappoint
Don’t just ignore my comment I’m just trying to promote my novel and I promise it won’t waste your time
Hello! Would you be interested in reviewing my book?
https://www.wattpad.com/story/402419672?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jeonfiction You're invited here cutie just give it a try you won't regret
Hi could you check out my book. I could really use the votes and comments. Plus reads. My book is called, "Never Mine." Its a Breakup, Romance Love story. Loads of drama. Maybe you will like it!!!!
If you don't want to i'd understand!!!!
"I've gone through everything: from watching my people die to being empty as nothingness," Lucian hisses with a soft smile.
"Why are you even still alive, then?," she asks, not quite understanding his reasons.
"Who? Me?," he smirks at her question. "Who lied to you like that?"
-
This is not a vampire novel—this is the vampire novel.
Welcome to "From the Dead to a Heartbeat", the world full of vamps, werewolves, demons and witches to which you'll be hooked real soon!
Genres:
-Vampire
-Werewolf
-Mystery
-Humor
-Thriller
-Horror
-Teenfiction
-Dark Romance
Hope you visit such novel! ♥️♥️♥️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406692881?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thisusernamistakenis
Hi dear, I am a new writer here, Have recently published few chapters of my ongoing web novel which is about slow burn romance. I would really appreciate if you can read and see if it is intriguing to you or not.
Title : Second Place Was Never Mine
Author : Ms. Venus
Link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/410485170?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=whatsapp&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Venus2911304
I'm really sorry for promoting my book on your page..
as a new writer, don't really have many ways to reach
readers, SO I hope you understand
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409770420?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=lostepilogue
Hi, if you're looking for your next read, try this. No regrets at all. Trust me✨
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409747270?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=RheaCassain