Sooraj

thanks my birthday is this week actually gotta go bye hoped u enjoyed my story theres more to come
          

course ur criticism isnt hurting or anything im taking it on board so thanks :):):) 

@pretty_pink_nails_  hei
          that's ok..
          keep writing more...
          We are waiting for your next work..
          and after all...Alice in wonder land is one of the great works..so its a honour you could make one..
          I hope my criticism isn't hurting a writer..

thanks for commenting and voting  and following i will make my story diffrent from the Alice and Wonderland etc :):):)
          

Second part of my story is out...that's the last part..
          Kindly read it

hello!! thanks for reading my poem.. i do appreciate it mister.. Please vote and comment to my stories right here .. i'ts my pleasure to have such wonderful comment of yours sir ... here's my link, http://www.wattpad.com/13568298-the-fake-girlfriend-job-on-going-prologue
          
          kindly vote to my chapters Sir :) thank you