Can you take a peak at my new story. It's a fantasy novel about a necromancer and the undead. Please just take a look and give me feedback. You won't regret it. Thanks abn have a great night
I think it's really good but I think because it's about death it is a little bit sad and creepy even though that it's good and keep doing the hard work but even though it's fantasy u could add a little bit of comedy to make it more affective and attractive to younger people