@WenWenNeo Ah..I know what's she been posting to your stories and I understand that it hurts. She openly criticized you and I feel bad for that, however your story does have its followers and lovers of it. Derpy, if you looked at her comment you can see that she thought it need more perspective and such, as for muffins? Well, considering the character that Derpy is, she will mention muffins alot and it's best to just brush that aside. I only looked at the latest comment and I do agree it could be considered part spam. Derpy does need to stop, but I ask that you do not take what she says so personal, your story, from what I have read is great and I recommend you keep going at it. Please in the future, be open to criticisms, and when people insult you, it will help to take a few deep breaths and possibly decipher what they mean. Are they repeatedly touching on one thing? Work on it. I look forward to reading the rest of your story, and I sincerely apologize for any feelings that have been hurt due to your exchange.