Hello! I've read some chapters of one of your stories and I found out you're open for criticisms. First of all, the idea and plot was so great otornimmm you don't have to overthink if pangit ka ba magsulat because it was good. Anw, on the other hand you might want to try 1st POV since for me medyo nakakalito konti if 3rd POV. The words alsooo were crafted and very detailed but if you can, use po mga words na simple lang. Ayon lang naman na-observe ko, overall it was gooodddd.