Hey everyone! I know it’s been quiet on my end and you’ve been asking for updates. The truth is, instead of rushing ahead, I took a step back to completely overhaul Volume 1.
The definitive version is officially LIVE! Here’s what changed:
Authentic Dialogue: I added proper honorifics and family names to accurately reflect the social boundaries between the cast.
Stronger Emotion: Kenji’s social anxiety is fully out,you’ll really feel the physical dread of what’s going through his head during the train and party scenes.
Smoother Pacing: The prose has been tightened up across the board for a much cleaner read.
Continuity Fixes: (And yes, I finally deleted that accidental author's note in the middle of chapter 5.5 )
Thank you for sticking with me during this break. Your support on here and TikTok means the world. Back to work on Volume 1.5!