@OhSnapItzTyy Hello! I just read your story and it's super good. I just want to give a suggestion or tip for you if it's okay. I was confused at first of how the story was going and I would say reading the description of your story, I thought I was reading an innocent character that was in danger but I didn't know that Yasmine is working against Jake. It's like giving the reader a taste of what the story is about but enough to draw them in, like the back of a book, so I would put more information of the description. This is just a suggestion that I thought would help you but all, I do think your story is good! I hope you keep writing!
