JackTheWriter95

Thank you for voting on my story thank you please tell me your thoughts 

Soulevenchie

@JackTheWriter95 Your welcome, and I completely understand your reasoning.
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JackTheWriter95

@Soulevenchie Thank you for telling me your thoughts and I shall answer in kind
            As for returning back home That's going to take a little bit It's not immediate I'm debating on how to do it per say
            Between writing the whole experience in the other world and then going home or at one point going home and when he does get home he explains what happens in the other world 
            Also please understand my writing is not the best some of it is not very good and I'm not a professional writer I am trying to improve my right style and the Warhammer fantasy one is incredibly old I have not updated the older chapters
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Soulevenchie

@JackTheWriter95, the story is good, though my experience with good and bad writing is not much I can still tell.
            Also I noticed that the books have izuku going into the world of Warhammer, really want to see izuku being successful or by accident in going back into his world, I want to see his interaction with the characters to a changed izuku who have been in the Warhammer universe (both 40k or fantasy)
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