@Soulmateslover
I love the beginning so far honestly,for me,it's giving Bridgestone meets twilight or any ithe movie about mates and here for it,I stan and I would love to be included on the ride,gurl ur work is slaying,damn
Omg thanks so much! I honestly was thinking of giving up and starting over cause I was thinking others find it boring
Please check my story out and give rating between 1-10 with your honest opinion. ^~^
Thanks for the follow I hope you enjoy the book.
I updated chapter 1 and 5. I also updated the page containing the Main Characters and Side Characters. I ALSO updated information about VanHaven.
I'd rate your story 7/10 it was an interesting read and I love the idea behind it, since it's only 5 chapters so far I didn't get to understand the characters much, I'd also like to understand why the FL acts the way she does did something happen to her or was she just naturally this way? Keep it up I'd love to see the story development more✨
It'd be a 7.5/10, I like the little flashback and how the story is progressing so far, note that in the future, when you're finished with the story, it might become a 10/10, your story isn't for everyone, tho so don't feel discouraged when someone doesn't like it. I encourage you to keep writing. Oh, Btw, the ML is quite the interesting character
Hey so I redid a couple chapters and was wondering if you could check it out again. I listen to your advice about the characters I hope now it’s more understanding. Please tell me if it’s still a 7/10!
Hey.. pls follow back
I wish there were more stories containing the main character(rather female or male) being more out there. Almost every story have a mean girl who is often described to be a slut who is usually the main one to bully the main character. I just wish there were more stories about the mean girl who ended up with an alpha maybe even a beta who ‘kindly’ convinces her to be his. ♀️
Thank you sooo much for voting on More Than Meets the Eye, love! It means more than you know to me.
Have the loveliest day xx
Hi @QueenLumina Thanks a lot for the follow!
Why, thank you for the vote!
