queen_eves

Hii

SoulsPenumbra

@queen_eves I'm pretty good. How are you?
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_cynthy_

Thanks for voting on my story, I hope you liked it! Uhm you could check out my poetry collection ❤

SoulsPenumbra

@theintrovertedshe You're welcome! I didn't get the chance to read much, but what I did read definitely made me want to hear more. Also, I'd be happy to go check out your collection. :)
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IpsitaChatteejee

Heyy! Could you please check out my novel? That'll mean a lot to me! 
          
          Name:- At The Extreme Of A Twisted Fantasy
          Genre:- Dark fantasy, psychological thriller
          Tags:- Magic, mystery, siblings, friendship, action, untitled love, joy, betrayal, tragedy <3

SoulsPenumbra

@IpsitaChatteejee Sure! I'll go read it right now. Thanks for the follow.
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MsPizzaGirl

I fixed part one could you tell me if it is better. Thx

LittleRaven94

@SoulsPenumbra 
            @MsPizzaGirl
            I saw that too, I wasn't sure if it was my phone playing up or what was going on.
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SoulsPenumbra

@MsPizzaGirl Yeah, it definitely feels like your changes improved the chapter a lot. When I'm reading it, though, there are a lot of sentences that repeat or get cut off. It could just be something wrong on my end, but you might want to check that out.
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