Hey i came across by your book and it got me interesting. The madness combat fanfic is a bit rare so it hard to find a good one, most of them are one shot. When i see this book talk about a human from real world fall from the sky in Nevada, a world full of grunt, that is when i knew this is the book that i been waiting for. I don't know if you still continue to finish the book or just leave it but if you do, well i will be glad to and so everyone else.
Good luck with your book, my friend