@DelicateEclipse My thanks! i didn't want to reply on the thread because it would draw people away form ur profile, so I'll post some review on Thorns here, if that's OK :) I love the premise, reminds me a little of Horizon Zero Dawn, a really cool story based video game. I would probably sharpen up the first line a little, just to clarify who is speaking. Maybe saying something like "I'm not ready to die. Not yet. If I have to kill you to ensure my own survival, I will not hesitate." I love the concepts you are trying to forward, and despite my triggering over your use of the name "Bella" (The days of Twilight still haunt me lol) I will definitely check out ur story too!
