SpaceOrbisStorys

So after a fairly long wait, the newest chapter of The Genin Hokage is posted for you all to hopefully enjoy. Real-life matters have been kind of a thing and have forced my time onto other matters.

AshiaSmith0

Plz do more chapters on the story u just uploaded

SpaceOrbisStorys

@AshiaSmith0 I will of course try to update the chapters I already have posted so I can start work on newer chapters.
            
            As I'm reworking/updating the chapters do you have any feedback so far?
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Soldier52

Are you still working on your Star Wars: Terran war book just wondering?

Soldier52

Thanks just wondering and I hope your able to deal with your real life matters 
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SpaceOrbisStorys

@Soldier52 Yes I'm still working on my Star Wars story. However, I have other stories to work on and overall real-life matters so time for that has been less then I would like. But yes I'm still working on it. 
            
            Why do you ask? Do you have any ideas?
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juubi-mage0327

hello
          
          i really enjoy your stories
          
          
          and was wondeting if youd try a prompt i made
          
          
          please reply if you see this

SpaceOrbisStorys

@juubi-mage0327 I'm free today so what exactly do you have in mind?
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juubi-mage0327

@SpaceOrbisStorys 
            
            ok
            
            please message me for we can talk about it when you have the time
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SpaceOrbisStorys

I have begun work on updating my Danzo Hokage story. The updated first chapter is now posted. Hopefully, I can make that story something great when I'm all done with updated the posted chapters.
          
          As for chapter nine, I already have it mostly done but before I post that I wanting to go back and redo the past eight. So if you have any feedback please post it on chapter one.

SpaceOrbisStorys

This has nothing to do with any of my stories but today a house fire burned everything and my sister is trying to get money to replace everything that was lost. If you can give anything it would be most welcomed.
          
          https://www.gofundme.com/single-father-lost-home-to-fire?fbclid=IwAR3iMn4vVG-rsCa4Aj6B5h7zqIqEbJ_7JCNwHibmkSCFugKfCeLjPktpPzE

SpaceOrbisStorys

I have some really bad news. A reviewer on fanfiction.net has told me he thinks this story sucks so sadly I'm reworking The Genin Hokage. This means that I'm going to go back and edit the whole thing. This is more a less a reworking from the ground up. All the chapters posted are now version 1.
          So as to allow you to see the edits I will keep the posted chapters with an edit to V1. Any edits made will be set in stone and I will not mess with them anymore.
          So yeah more or less a whole new story now. The first chapter of The Genin Hokage V2 will likely be posted soon. Good news is I have something to base it off so hopefully, I'll be back up in a few weeks.

SpaceOrbisStorys

@scrletfyre It's alright he made some good points and I felt I could do better. The story isn't dead...far from it in fact. I'm just restarting it and added more info and covered more of the world.
            
            The first chapter of this is already up and I'm working on chapter 2 now. I'll have to look at that story and see if it's any good. Anyway later.
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scrletfyre

I hate reviewers like that. I got the same reaction when I posted “The Forgotten Child of Destiny” that I took it down from fanfiction.net and only kept the story on Wattpad. There is no pleasing some people
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