John

Dear writer,
          If it is possible can u write an alternative version of what we broke.
          I understand what you wrote and I like it especially the ending because in a way everyone was healing at the end.
          But I feel like it could gone in a better way like Rachel forgiving Katie and her and James work it out or be friends or whatnot.
          But I’m not trying to put pressure on you but I feel that would make things ease a little better 

Author,
          You have poured your heart and soul into your story, What We Broke. It is indeed an incredibly written work of fiction. It is about what all three characters “broke”, along with the very messy aftermath. You have a wonderful way of writing complex feelings and emotions. This really has been exciting for me, and I have looked daily for new chapters. I realize some comments can be discouraging. Please know that you have written the heck out of this book! It is a great reading journey…

Loving this story so much!  I’m really curious will this end up being a redemption story or will there be a new H? If it is redemption, I’m so interested to see how you’ll manage to redeem him after everything. You’re doing such an amazing job with the emotions and tension! 

Author,
          I am glad to have found your stories! I’m glad to see you have posted a new one. Thank you! You are extremely gifted to write and I am in love with your words! You are writing the stories you have imagined. Many people voice their opinions, but your story is created by the use of your unique voice…. In other words, 
          You do you! 

I read what we broke and I have a feeling that Katie and James somehow will be a relationship but their relationship will be toxic. I hope they heal and have a happy ending with other people not with each other 

I am loving this opportunity to read What We Broke! You are creating such a unique and insightful story. Just wanted to thank you…

Hi! @Spaced_Invader I’m Elsa. I saw your story ( What We Broke ) and was curious if you’d be interested in having me create a piece for it in my unique art style.