SpadeZ

New story update !!!
          I just published "Hey" of my story "Broken". https://www.wattpad.com/1523295010?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=SpadeZ_006

Author i kinda got a request for you hope you like it 
          
          In which BTS members are were in the same school but not friends really they all were quite known to e/o but never talked some were enemies some were just a known of the name and all 7 of them were popular, one day they all got detention and there principal make them clean a store room there jimin (any member you would love) finds an unknowns book and everyone gathered around and joon being a nerd took interest in that book but found that there was only 1 page and the whole book was unfilled and when he came to an end he found some weird words which he read and suddenly started to pull in slowly slowly other members got pulled in too while saving joon and the book closed and the series started THE RELEAM OF PARADOXIA! (or whatever you like)
          
          Each member receives a unique magical power related to their personality.
          They must fight through challenges, monsters, puzzles in order to escape.
          During the journey, they go from strangers , teammates , best friends, they fought they becomes jealous they teased they enjoyed the most precious time of there lives
          
           In the end, after finishing all challenges, they get thrown out of the book back into the storeroom.
          They look at each other and realize:
          They’re not strangers anymore. They’re family.
          And from that day on, they stay together and eventually become the group known as BTS 
          Optional Opening Scene (You can add this if you want)
          “We entered as strangers.
          We fought as teammates.
          We returned as family.”
          
          make the ship like yoonmin (centeric) ,taekook,namjin and hobi with anyone you love

I’m reading Mrs Min and you keep saying to post corrections, so politely I might add, but I don’t wanna insult you by doing so :,( how would you like corrections noted? In the comments? Or here on the message board? I don’t wanna put your writing in a bad light but don’t want others to see the mistakes. They’re simple corrections mostly. What to do??? Please tell me, Yoda :)

Hi
           How are you doing  
          I hope you are doing well 
          I miss you 
          
          

@joy1131996 It was okay. I was able to get the passing grade . Thanks 

@vick3er You're welcome 

Hi , I'm Vick3er , thank you for reading and always voting and supporting my book Forbidden love. 
          
          
          I purple you 

I've edited Web Of Lies because I found many errors when going through it. It is my first and favourite story and I hope you all like it the way I do.
          
          Thank you for the supporting I really appreciate it.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/365445598

@joy1131996 Thanks  
          I'm sorry I don't know how to fix it, but it's working on my phone.
          
          Thank you for tour thoughts though, I really appreciate it. 

My name is joy
          Am 28 years old 
          Am from South Sudan but  living in Egypt