xcoffeeandbooksx
Hi, @Sparkiling_Waters! My friend is writing a new book and she needs some feedback. Can you give it a read (if you have enough time, of course) and tell her what you think? Thank you. You can find it here: https://my.w.tt/tM3shAzbm3
Sparkiling_Waters
I’ve read it so far and I like it. Some final editing could make the story flow a little better but the spelling was good and I liked the 2 POVs for the different characters. All in all it was a good start for a book and I’m interested to see where it goes.
