SabhyataSahu

My apologies for sliding into your Conversations board uninvited.
          I just wanted to grab your attention to my stories. There is an arranged marriage story, a teen romance, a young adult, and some mafia stories. They are all COMPLETED.
          You can find a link to them on my profile here @SabhyataSahu 
          Once again, I'm sorry for intruding. Have a nice day ahead.!!!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/239672415-mafia-miss-honey

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

Sparkle_Jas

Oh yeah, I just remember one thing that could be improved on. I think the time jumps could be improved on. At some points I knew the time differences but then at others I’d be confused. For example, how long Scarlet and Aiden had been together. Maybe I just missed the sentences that connected one point to another. Anyways, I think that was my only issue while reading
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Sparkle_Jas

The story was honestly really good, I couldn’t stop reading it because i wanted to know what happened next. Keep up the good work
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farthestdarkeststar

Heyyyy.... I am posting this msg on your profile with high hopes and more than high anticipation. I am writing a new werewolf book "The Wolf and his Moon". Few chapters are already up. Updates are frequent and the chapters are long.
          
          Please check it out and share your views. They mean a lot to me.
          
          I sincerely hope that you give my story a chance and like it. Fingers crossed!!!
          
          Have a good day ahead