@Sparkling_Starla33 totally. espacially in like chapter two when the two main characters kiss and have a first date and fall in love way too fast. i hate it when they escalate quickly.
i have such a pet peeve about bad luterature and things. like punctuation and wording. lol. especially when my english knowledge and writing is better then somones story tht i read and im older than them. gah! lol. of course not regarding u. lol