I can see the story in my head of what I can see happening, but when I'm trying to tell you I question myself, but I see them going out and looking at apartments close to the college, then they are attending the other boy's try to get their attention and being rebuffed, they go to a party and when one of them goes to the bathroom, they get raped (I'm thinking Ivy, but this IS your story) and she becomes pregnant, so you can write about their times through this, and how they stick together, see I can SEE that your story isn't over yet, with her parents splitting up!! I'm obviously more of a happy ending type!!
Thank you, and I hope my thoughts inspired you to keep writing!?
@Misty2Dorothea