DarctZero1974563

You know I just finished reading your story (Up to the current chapter and I'm delighted with how you're handling Brown) And just as I finished reading it I started to imagine what it would be like to see him return to combat but first fight against some Astros and take their technology and have the Strider install it (Imagine an Astros sword with our boy, it would look absolutely incredible) and that he himself helps save his cameraman comrades, but they couldn't even see it completely, they would only see him finish off enemies at high speed, with precision, and when describing it to the members of the alliance, they just say that they saw a brown blur with a sword, slashing the enemies, and that later (In the context that I imagined he reappears is in chapter 77) to help the TV titan, imagine an epic entrance knocking down the Astro UFO at high speed, and then after an explosion he appears surrounded by the flames of the explosion walking with the sword (My mind, every time it visualizes that moment, accompanies it with the song Hell's Comin' with Me playing in the background)

TurboTerminatr

are you making stories on other  accounts? are you trying to make an ARG, perhaps?

TurboTerminatr

@Sparrowchik ahhhh wait that does kind of look like him now that I think about it
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TurboTerminatr

@Sparrowchik Where? Was it that scene while they were teleporting or something?
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UndertaleFan2077

Yo. Are you still alive? I miss your story 

UndertaleFan2077

@UndertaleFan2077 it's fine, what's your AO3 so I can check out the other story?
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Sparrowchik

@UndertaleFan2077 hi, sorry for taking so long to respond, i didn't mean to take such a long break but i've been busy. also i wrote some other fanfic that's only on ao3 so far but I might put it up here in case people are interested
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TurboTerminatr

Sparrowchik

@K0rts1 don't worry, i got it taken down :)
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K0rts1

There are people who just lack creativiy, and wanna make a quick buck by leeching off of other peoples stories
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TurboTerminatr

@Sparrowchik good question. I don't have any good answers though
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nathaneskell

Hey pearly whenever I was taught like I know you said that you like actions and that in your last message I’m pretty sure or something similar to that like I wasn’t make the entire series like on the entire idea not being action but you can just like there’s still can be action or not but he has a love interest do you know like if you just don’t rather just have action I respect that but if you want you can you could do that as well just wanted to let you know

Sparrowchik

The fact that he loves TV Woman is an important part of the story but it’s not really a shipping fanfic 
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