Spastic_Jellyfish

Anyone with tips or thoughts please feel free to comment ( be gentle haha) 

KobayashiCraig

Hey! 
          Thanks for your votes on the MMO Apocalypse! I hope you like it and I appreciate your support. 
          
          Craig

Spastic_Jellyfish

@KobayashiCraig  I don't know if leaving it free would be the best idea, maybe make it cheap like $1.99 or 2.99 but making it free makes the download go up but decreases return reader making the it seem like people didn't like the first , but that's just my logic 
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KobayashiCraig

@SammyAC great idea, I originally liked the idea of leaving book one to end there with the possibilities wide open (mostly because I plan to keep book one a free book even when published to Amazon, then charging for book two). A short epilogue could really set the scene for book two though. Will add to my list of things for final edit. Thanks again :) 
            Craig
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Spastic_Jellyfish

@KobayashiCraig I'd just adding a epilogue detailing the humans setting up a small community and the plan for taking the dungeon, also story wise maybe some of the dragons feel bad for the genocide and are willing to help the humans in exchange for a pact or alliance 
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