Spec Eye

Yeah, you right.. I really don't know how to explain in context. That's is why, there is many dialogue in my story. 
            
            Actually, to tell you the truth, I never read novel before that's why my writing is really bad. I only read comic, that is also reason I put a lot of dialogue. 

hi :), I'm a bit confused about the current state your story is in. I haven't been reading it in quite awhile but I just sometimes feel like thing happen way too quickly, like how it's like *boom!* and more random sounds, then *huff huff* something happens and then someone dead, or you know? 
            
            Or maybe you don't know what I mean...
            
            Anyway, I just went and read your latest chapter and, should there be some context before some things happen? Because when reading your stories I notice that there are much more words than context/description.
            
            Like, "Hasn't Raqnid saved you a long time ago? But why didn't you return home? "Wells asked.
            "I lost my memory father!"
            "Lost your memory! So now your memory has returned?"
            "Yes, father! My memory only recovered two days ago. I just realized who I really am."
            
            In the paragraphs above, around 90% of it is this that character's say, and the other 10% is context and description.

@a_username_lils Really! Thank.. I hope to get more honest opinion from you!!