virasweet

So i need a friend of Teagans in my book and i was wondering if you wanted me to put you in it or if you had a good name idea.

virasweet

 Ok thx also i put another chapter up and redid the first one kinda so tell me if you like it or not or what to do if its weird
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SpecialFXatHeart

You can put Brooklyn in it if you would like to
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virasweet

Hey, so i made the start of a story and i want to know if its good or not could you read it and help me. Its on my profile now.

virasweet

 Omg thanks so much, and that really helps me alot this is my first story
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SpecialFXatHeart

I just read your first chapter and I adore the story line!! One thing that would make it better is to just proof read it all before publishing the chapter. If you are typing on a computer you can copy and paste it into google translate and have it read to you so you can find some spelling errors or missing punctuation. It just something that might help. Or if you write on your phone or hand held device then you could just read it slowly to spot out anything out of place. But other than that you are doing great and I will send the story to some friends and put your name in my bio to get you more attention!! Keep up the great work!!
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