I just read your first chapter and I adore the story line!! One thing that would make it better is to just proof read it all before publishing the chapter. If you are typing on a computer you can copy and paste it into google translate and have it read to you so you can find some spelling errors or missing punctuation. It just something that might help. Or if you write on your phone or hand held device then you could just read it slowly to spot out anything out of place. But other than that you are doing great and I will send the story to some friends and put your name in my bio to get you more attention!! Keep up the great work!!
Hi i love the outsiders as well and im thinking about making a story about it but i was wondering if you are able to read one of my storys and tell me how it is so i could improve on it...and the outsiders story will be out pretty soon❤