AnonMHAY

Are you still alive ?

bibianacalvomouzo8

@Spectra1997 - - The Sovereign of the Underworld: Shadows of the Leaf - I'll read this novel to you tomorrow and see what advice I can come up with. I hope the first message I sent you will be of some use in writing the new chapter. I'll read it to you and then give you my advice. Please, I beg you, think carefully about the two previous messages I sent you so I can read this novel calmly and feel more comfortable giving you advice. Tell me what your advice is when you have some free time. I'll be waiting for your reply.
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bibianacalvomouzo8

@AnonMHAY  - The Sovereign of the Underworld: Shadows of the Leaf - but what do you think of the sacred motto of the Uzumaki clan and family comes first, never leave anyone behind. And besides giving Naruto his birthright according to the law, the eldest is the first to inherit the clan, and instead they give it to those arrogant twins who would blame Naruto for everything those two shitty twins come up with. Tell me, in the Naruto novels, when he's the eldest, they always take it away at the age of six in front of everyone, even the clan heads. That's how Naruto found out; they even took away his dream of becoming the village's Kage. That's from other novels, but tell me, what will this have to do with his rights to everything related to the Uzumaki clan, his weapons, scrolls, and the money in the Uzumaki account and his concubines? What do you think about all the female bijuu? Tell me your answer. P.S. I'll read you the novel as soon as I can. What's your answer?
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Spectra1997

@bibianacalvomouzo8 I am going to answer all your suggestions together with this:
            First, seeing the story picture, if you know the original character of that face, then you will know that Naruto hates romance but rather he will restore his own version of the Uzumaki lineage with a harem of concubines, strong loyal concubines especially those with bloodlines, because he hates weak women.
            2. As for reactions from the past hokages and the dead Uzumaki clan, don't worry there will be a special chapter for it
            3. As for consequences especially on uzumaki clan sacred laws just wait and see, you will love it.
            4. As for the gods and the sages, well there is no need to include them, because I have a special lore for naruto's power and it involves two prophecies connected together instead of one and it will be shown in the next two chapters
            5. The endgame of this story, well I didn't make that grand story title for nothing, just relax and enjoy
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AnonMHAY

Mate, i have another story in my mind. But i need powerful 2 quirks. No All for One or One for All. Could you help me. An please no God quirk.... 
          Thank you...

Spectra1997

@AnonMHAY That's easy
            1. Adaptation like Mahoraga
            2. Telekinesis like Tatsumaki
            3. Vector Manipulation
            4. Probability Manipulation
            5. Intangibility and Kamui like Obito with two complete eyes
            Pick anyone
            or 
            Make him quirkless but have the following options:
            1. Hanma Bloodline
            2. Kure Bloodline
            3. All Powers and Bloodlines in Lookism
            Pick Anyone
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