SpectrePhantomForce

Hey everyone, I’m sure you guys noticed that I changed the cover of my Yugioh Story:
          	
          	Yugioh Arc V: The Spirit King
          	
          	Let me know what you guys think in the comments! 

Ahrino

Hey spectre how's it going- .......actually this the 3rd time doing this right now and still waiting for your response on how are you doing though? gotten through to your studies

Ahrino

but hey your busy so take you time
            
            oh while you're at it i found another opening instead of the other one so here it is
            
            "Sorairo Days" by Shoko Nakagawa
            
            it fits plus it is an upbeat, emotional anthem that represents themes of hope, growth, and fighting spirit, often lauded for its complex melody and high-energy feel
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Ahrino

T_T where are you my friend 
            
            did i do something wrong?
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Ahrino

hey spectre how have you been lately

Ahrino

is the chapter published yet
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SpectrePhantomForce

@Ahrino Ive been pretty good. How about you?
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Ahrino

Morning spectre,
          
          just checking how are you today in college
          
          i have my oc ready here it is:
          
          Name: Soren 
          
          gender: male
          
          deck: D/D/D, D/D and D/D/D/D
          
          aces:D/D/D Alfred the Divine Sage King, D/D/D Wise King Solomon,D/D/D First King Clovis and D/D/D Sky King Zeus Ragnarok
          
          backstory: a boy who was an human android before shiryu took him in and fixed his programming, and has been developed of having emotions anf feeling like a real human shiryu taught him about duel and shiryu doesn't know where his deck came from, it was similar to declans deck but different and having different DDD and DD along with a link monster. Shiryu asked what was he doing but soren had no memory but his own name. 
          
          he's now in the xyz dimension aiding the resistance aswell as helping others in the synchro dimension and people suspect that he's similar to declan but a bit younger and different appearance.
          
          relationships:
          
          -shiryu: looks up to him as a big brother figure
          
          - declan: surprisingly meeting soren for first really raises so many questions but nevertheless soren thinks of him as an elder brother since soren has declans dna
          
          -layra akaba: soren's younger sister

Ahrino

and also i've forgot to mention that sorens deck has similar cards as declans but others cards are different (and their in the yugioh database/ yugioh neuron)
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Ahrino

aswell as the song i found a day ago have you by any chance listen to it?
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Ahrino

cool man and have you read the adivce i wrote to you 2 days ago
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Ahrino

hey it me again, how have you been lately

Ahrino

Hey spectre are you around? sorry that i was bothering you
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Ahrino

i mean title of this song sorry
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Ahrino

also i've found this song that you might like and maybe add it for your opening if you want to.... try to listen to it and see if you like it or not
            
            link: -Error · GARNiDELiA-
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Ahrino

well not sure but i think i know how just imagine that you're writting a story for you readers and you want to have the lore good like others having connections and interactions, if you start with dueling you'd have writes chapters for each group that is separated before regrouping with the others, if you do a non-dueling then you have more connects and interactions with others duelist. 
          
          All I'm saying that don't get you brain to stress and just brainstorm ideas by writing drafts and edit some scenes.
          
          if you're stuck then maybe ask the readers or create a voting survey to have the question: for the next chapter should i include.... and have one being duel and other being no duel. Also if you spare time, maybe try  find inspirations by watching the yugioh anime series, going through yugioh master duels to check which cards and decks to use and go through Pinterest to fin character designs, styles and clothing

Ahrino

and a heads up i meant edit some scenes you think needed work thats what i meant sorry
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Ahrino

and by spirits, i mean duel spirits of course
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Ahrino

you don't need add that chapter that i've told you maybe later okay
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Ahrino

hi notice something different in ajax his style some how changed in chapter 11

Ahrino

if you're stuck then maybe ask the readers or create a voting survey to have the question: for the next chapter should i include.... and have one being duel and other being no duel. Also if you spare time, maybe try  find inspirations by watching the yugioh anime series, going through yugioh master duels to check which cards and decks to use and go through Pinterest to fin character designs, styles and clothing.
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Ahrino

well not sure but i think i know how just imagine that you're writting a story for you readers and you want to have the lore good like others having connections and interactions, if you start with dueling you'd have writes chapters for each group that is separated before regrouping with the others, if you do a non-dueling then you have more connects and interactions with others duelist. 
            
            All I'm saying that don't get you brain to stress and just brainstorm ideas by writing drafts and edit some scenes.
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SpectrePhantomForce

@Ahrino I got a little burned out today. I also couldn’t decide if I should include a duel in it since that would not only make the chapter quite long but also is something I can easily split into 2 chapters. Let me know what you think I should do since I’m about to sleep right now  
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Ahrino

Hi its me again i was wondering of something..... what for the anime opening for the yugioh story i was curious of it and i really like the english songs they played in the yugioh 5d's, GX and Arc-v. But japanese songs are also cool and it might be suitable for it.

Ahrino

don't mention it
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SpectrePhantomForce

@Ahrino Thank you :) I appreciate the advice
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Ahrino

your best efforts i mean
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