SpiritedSenses

I have not forgotten about City On Fire, I haven't had much time to work on it. I'm going to have a third part before tomorrow night though, so I urge you to read it and make suggestions 

SpiritedSenses

The first chapter, second part, is now uploaded for The City on Fire. Vote and Comment if you wish. I accept constructive criticism, and if you wish to offer an idea for the story I'll dedicate a chapter to you when I use that idea. It's also nice to tell me if you see an edit I may have missed. 

SpiritedSenses

For those that care. The second part for The City on Fire will hopefully be up tomorrow. I have it completely written, but I need to edit (aka typing it up and fixing any errors I find on my written copy) so thanks to any who read my story. Extra thanks if you tale time to vote and comment. I hope you enjoy it if you read it