Spongy449

Quick question before I drop chapter.
          	
          	Would Vertin finally be able to learn the truth? How would she react? Would relationship status change?

KnowKnight

@IndieVideoGameLover I meant the deal between y/n and Constantine, not his identity
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IndieVideoGameLover

@KnowKnight Z has no idea who y/n really is, she has no idea we are the kid from the academy stuff, and not going in a positive direction I think it would not go negative at all, after all we are finally getting to the part I have been waiting for in this remake, lastly fully positive no, a good and liking each other relationship that's a little to soon but negative no, but I am very excited for what comes next.
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KnowKnight

@Spongy449 The only way it'd happen is if Madam Z told her, can't figure out another way it'd happen. She'd probably try to rationalize it, as she seems to to have a tendency of doing so. The relationship would definitely change, but in a positive direction I very much doubt
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Spongy449

Quick question before I drop chapter.
          
          Would Vertin finally be able to learn the truth? How would she react? Would relationship status change?

KnowKnight

@IndieVideoGameLover I meant the deal between y/n and Constantine, not his identity
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IndieVideoGameLover

@KnowKnight Z has no idea who y/n really is, she has no idea we are the kid from the academy stuff, and not going in a positive direction I think it would not go negative at all, after all we are finally getting to the part I have been waiting for in this remake, lastly fully positive no, a good and liking each other relationship that's a little to soon but negative no, but I am very excited for what comes next.
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KnowKnight

@Spongy449 The only way it'd happen is if Madam Z told her, can't figure out another way it'd happen. She'd probably try to rationalize it, as she seems to to have a tendency of doing so. The relationship would definitely change, but in a positive direction I very much doubt
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Spongy449

Chapter 30:
          
          How it happened is unknown, did someone send a secret police?
                    
          Make no mistakes, their services were outsourced by something better. 
                     These paramilitary clowns wanted to time travel to a blank era so bad that it made them look like one of the tinfoil hat guys who believes WIFI 2G gave them radiation—a slow, painful death; just to show how backwards they are. Why bother going somewhere where even Wikipedia gives up? He was glad to have made these bloodthirsty assholes meet their makers, and the next thug he sees shall know what the Scenery of the Doomsday looks like. The moment he stepped inside the perimeter again, he was greeted by a Ritualist herself.
          
          "You have finally returned," she announced and bowed down,
                    "If you don't mind. What is so inviting near the school that you temporarily leave us to our own devices, the Tempest? I can't imagine how deserted that place is; was the situation over there finally settled?" She confidently assumes that their force has completely eradicated the remaining defenders, and the campuses are now under their control.
          
          "Whatever happens there is not your concern, but I can assure you that they are now in a better place." Y/N played his deity roles fluently.
          
          "That is a relief, Lady Arcana would be grateful for your effort." she is pleased to hear that, 
                      "Are you coming with us to a Blank Era? Mother of Resurrection awaits your final decisions regarding the matter; the eternal reward is on the horizon shall you accept. Without your help, we wouldn't be able to crush those white-clad. I must personally thank you for distributing the mask, and giving us a weapon to fully armed ourselves; allowing us to sustain losses longer than we thought."
          
          "Don't thank me yet, because I have a few things to show you what I can do more than a mere investor." 
          
          He was about to unalive these freaks.

Spongy449

This is horrible
          
          Still stuck during the production of scene 4 :/

Spongy449

@IndieVideoGameLover @KnowKnight 
            
            The matter is subjective; it was up to the reader's interpretation how you define—who and what are Y/N.
            
            To put it simply, nuanced.
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IndieVideoGameLover

@KnowKnight Well I was told it was a self insert story by the writer, so I will not lie and say it would suck if that was not the case and it turned out I was reading a oc.
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KnowKnight

@IndieVideoGameLover I'd agree but Y/n here actually seems to be less of a self insert and an actual character with them being unnamed to not bound them so to speak. On the ao3 version, chapter 27, Spongy replied to a commenter that it is the easiest placeholder name.
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Spongy449

"Yes, you are!" she shot back. 
                       "Your tone... the way you're speaking to me right now... it's so blunt, as if you've already accepted that I'm going to die. That doesn't sound like you at all."
          
          "I never said I wanted you to die, I merely accepted the conclusion that not everyone can be saved."
          
          "They can!" Merel argued. 
                         "People can be saved! You've simply decided that those who suffer are no longer your responsibility. How could you? Were you against me trying to save them?"
          
          "I'm not against your decision." The Tempest raised and held the Equilibrium Umbrella upright between them. 
                    "Saving lives is your choice, and I respect it. What I am saying is that some offers only come once. Once they pass you by, there's no calling them back. Take a closer look. Imagine you're still yourself, and this umbrella is your lifeline—both literally and metaphorically. I offered it to you under one condition: leave everything behind and never look back. You refused: again, and again, then another. The more rejection that were thrown towards my face, the more I know that there is nothing I can do about it. That is the main reason why I assumed it has always been this way; one is the representative of all—one can represent hope for all, and one's decision represents the unavoidable fate of all. That single choice can reveal the fate of an entire group—you are not the first person to make this choice, and you will not be the last"
                        He let the umbrella fall onto the floor and stomped it hard—crushing the power unit hidden within its frame; it sparked before falling silent forever. "That broken device, is why it's called a once-in-a-lifetime offer. I'm not upset because you rejected me. I'm upset because there's nothing I can do against the inevitable. You gave your life to save a dozen, and you have my respect—albeit utilitarianism, I guess that benefits the higher up after all. Do you understand what I'm trying to say now?"