SpringBreezeAngel

Thank god for Evernote! My tablet cracked, but luckily everything I had planned out and was working on was saved with Evernote and I was able to access it through my laptop!

SpringBreezeAngel

I want to take a minute to thank the people who have taken the time to read my story Wick & Wind. Every new read makes me very happy and feel accomplished. It gives me the push and incentive I need to continue to write and hopefully (for once) finish my stories.
          
          Thank you!
          ~Nel~

SpringBreezeAngel

Not that anyone is following me yet, but I feel I should clarify. The first chapter of Scorpion Eagle Phoenix will be the only one I post. The reason being is that this is a story, among perhaps a few others, I feel confident about getting published once done. Think of this first chapter as an excerpt. 
          
          But I am mulling around the idea of writing a story just for wattpad. It's along the lines of your basic teenager finding out she's a witch, but more element based. Something I had started on Quizilla a few years ago but more developed.
          
          I am probably getting in over my head though. I just miss/ need writing online ever since MTV/ teen nick destroyed then deleted my writing home.
          
          We'll see what happens.

SpringBreezeAngel

@bluewolfchapter  it mostly takes a lot of practice. you need to play around with starting sentences in different ways.
            
            start by trying to rewrite this sentence in at least three ways adding or subtracting details as you see fit:
            
            I ran as fast as my legs would carry me, headed straight into the unknown.
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bluewolfchapter

@SpringBreezeAngel I'm a very new author, could you tell me how to make better sentence structures on the book Beauty of the Earth? I could use all the help I can get
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