The_Dark_Doom_Slayer

Can you continue the story where deku was sent into the fnaf world at williams death all the way to ruin and escaped

Pushi19

@The_Dark_Doom_Slayer 
            
            System Story: Deku's Cultivation System add more chapters please and thank you I am big o fan your work.
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Delray25

Would you continue the cultivation system story. I just read it and it was really good so far.

SpringTrap212332

@Delray25 exactly why I left it's future to anyone who wants to try it.
            I laid the foundation, I want to see what kind of structure people will build.
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Delray25

Anybody who has continued that corporation story send me a message cuz I would like to read the rest of it
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Delray25

@SpringTrap212332 ah okay it's really good concept. 
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purpleguywrites67

Can I give you some criticism, as someone who has read almost all your books?

purpleguywrites67

@SpringTrap212332 so in my opinion, your main character hardly sees adversity. They can trump anyone almost effortlessly, and they are smarter than everyone. If they fail, its usually nothing serious and is easily fixed. A few storys make sense, like when a character backstory is changed, but in my opinion, izuku midoryia is not a super genius, and her 100 percent isnt the smartest person on the planet when he can't top bakugo on a test. Now sometimes it makes sense for him to be smart, but if feels like every single mc is a genius, and people cant really relate. Other than that, i do love your books, and i hope you do keep writing!!!
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