burnedgood67

Can you proof read my story? If your too busy it is fine but i would like some advice

burnedgood67

I was thinking taking a slower approach, because harry is empathetic, so i dont think he would kill big spooder, and the assimilation thing more or less just uses the mass
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SpringTrap212332

Looks interesting. I don't know anything about Murder Drones but this has a lot of potential, like assimilating the Basilisk and Acromantula to begin with.
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SethTDW

Greetings my friend, how is your health and sanity lmao?

SethTDW

@SpringTrap212332 what if if theres one time ability where a Kwami can seperate and bond to a new Miraculous, leaving behind an “unstable” Miraculous, containing the original power but no Kwami to control the output, forcing the original user into a deeper state of obsession with their emotions and their goals. And by bonding to a New Miraculous, the Kwami grants the host new abilities and even a new “weapon”. So if Nooroo left Gabriel, then she (imma always see Nooroo as a she) would leave behind a Hawkmoth who makes the Rings and uses the Powers of other Kwami, but bring about a new hero with access to more skills like say, Empathic Abilities and even perhaps some kind of Blackwhip that works like the Lasso of Truth and forces your emotions to the surface
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SethTDW

@SpringTrap212332 all good. Why not have Nooroo abandoned the Box and find Izuku? Switch her to a Ring for example and leave Gabriel unstable cause without her, he cannot use his power without mental instability 
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SethTDW

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@SpringTrap212332 for Gabriel, he’d become unhinged. He’d become more and more obsessed with the Ladybug and Black Cat Miraculous, to the point he no longer recognises the name Gabriel, only Hawkmoth, which could lead to that whole shit with Gabriel making those weird Rings. Eventually it would be destructive but it’s more insanity kind. Nooroo, she’d be weakened a lot, unable to do much but feel her next Holder, she’d need to go through a hibernation for about a week or so after she finds her next Holder. Power wise I imagine she gains more than just Empath and Akumatisation, and can now do something like perhaps, allow the Holder to see memories, alter and erase emotions/memories and such. Anything that relates to an Empath. Maybe developing Telekinesis or evolving Empathy to Psychokinesis, where she’s now the Kwami of the Mind?
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SethTDW

Hello my good friend! I’d like to propose an idea if you are willing to hear me out

SethTDW

@SpringTrap212332 greetings, this is the Author Health Hotline, how is your health
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SethTDW

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@SpringTrap212332 that’s good man. I like to check in with people, see how they’re doing considering the fucking bullshit snowflakes on here say and do
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