UnbredSpring

Heyo I just saw your comments on my first chapter of my book… I’m obviously an amateur writer (I just started college) and it seems action and dialogue tags, ellipses, and em- dash grammar are my weaknesses… Do you mind explaining them to me?

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Hey there,
          
          Just a friendly reminder to complete your side of the C4C. :)
          
          Cheers,
          A Girl Who Writes

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          Thank you,
          
          Author,
          Miss Kadambari 
          

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