@Squirtlesaur4ever Everyone's first story isn't a hit, you learn more from the various constructive criticism and feebacks you get.
Even if it's not really pleasing to you, you should definitely post it. Others May surely like it.
And for my part, I'll surely read your story no matter what. We all Pokeshipper's should support each other. I could continue writing stories only and only because I got support from others.
You should surely publish!
Eagerly waiting,
Pepper