shebephoebe

Thank you so much for reading and voting for "Soar"! I'd love to hear what you think of it if you ever have a chance. 

shebephoebe

@Srarlight Thank you so much for your honest input, especially the point about Azadryn's development. I have made notes to adjust that in future edits because, as you pointed out, that sort of personality adjustment isn't plausible so quickly. Ah, first drafts!
            I'm glad you enjoyed it! Have a good day!
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Srarlight

@themagicmirror I loved your book Soar,  it was well written and no where near cliche. The plot and story flowed smoothly with lots of twists and turns. The character development was not the best for if your whole life you were a slave I don't think disrespecting the Royals is something plausible that quickly. After that though it was an amazing story that I enjoyed every second. It deserves to be known and plan to share it with my friends.
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