Yo!!
I checked out Ishq-e-Siyah, and it looks interesting, but dark romance isn’t really my kind of genre. I don’t think I’d be able to give you the kind of feedback your story deserves.
I’d still love to continue supporting your book I'm reading now, “ Sitam-e-mahobbat”.
Also, your new book, “Deewana Ishq mera” seems quite intriguing when I read the blurb, I'll be waiting for it updates as well.