Mystic Star

HEY GUYS!!!!! 
          My first story "the devil's mercy" has been completed. check it out and i would like to know your opinion. Thank you with lots of love
                                                                                  -Mystic star

i am not sure whether my stories will be readers liking, i will try my best to be interesting. also, my first work "THE DEVIL'S MERCY" has started and i published 4 episodes of it ,its a mafia romance themed story ,you guys can check it out, and i would also like to know your opinion about my works so i can improve myself.i will come with more new interesting and entertaining stories...stay tuned