StVitus

Just made a slight update to Chapter 11 to fix an continuity error. Vaughan was telling Humphrey where Elizbeth's island. Problem: Elizabeth never told him.  . . . which is why Humphrey still didn't know where it was later on when talking to Orson. 
          	
          	That, my friends, is how writing novels is. And why this is an alpha version of the book! :)

StVitus

Just made a slight update to Chapter 11 to fix an continuity error. Vaughan was telling Humphrey where Elizbeth's island. Problem: Elizabeth never told him.  . . . which is why Humphrey still didn't know where it was later on when talking to Orson. 
          
          That, my friends, is how writing novels is. And why this is an alpha version of the book! :)

StVitus

Sorry about the rash of new part notifications. I decided to switch them to public instead of private. Private stories turned out to have so many disadvantages it was making the process too complicated. (did you know that comments on private stories don't show up in your notifications?)

StVitus

I posted another couple chapter of Scions #3 yesterday and today. As you read, if you get ideas for possible titles let me know.  I hope to continue to follow the pattern established with the first two Dauther of Nothing, Child of Lies, so I'm looking for something in the patter _____ of _______.