xaeiya
heyyy! the book you told me to give my opinions, i read the prologue and the first chapter and they're really great! your friend has really good writing! (better than me, at least.)
your friend has really good writing skills and i see any problems or something that needs to be worked on, really.
my overall opinion of it is that: the book is written very well! but i have no interest in reading it further as i'm more into fanfictions rather than books that were made originally owo
Stairah
@BOBASEUNGS awieee thank you so much senpai, it was really such a pleasure that you took a peek of my friend's work. I'm crying (ಥ _ ಥ)