Ello- Uh I'm a writer and need some opinions on how to improve my writing (be nice about it though). Any rude comments will be deleted and I will block you (I'm just a girl 🎀) Here are some facts about me ; - I'm a dancer and have been dancing for 20-21 years - I am delusional (obviously) - I'm pretty fun to talk to (if I do say so myself) - I am a mother of two (I have 2 dogs) - and I have ADHD xx